All Comments on 'Change of Plans'

This is an auspicious start to your writing here. Most interesting beginning.

Five.

Not bad for your first story! Looking forward to reading more!

Very good, please continue writing, you're very talented.

this is really good. I'm looking forward to the next update, so don't keep me waiting for too long. lol Great job!

Haven't commented on a Lit story in quite some time, but this was excellent!!! Looking forward to see what unfolds.

This is my first story, and your encouragement has been really helpful, I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible.

-naomi

OMG... I wish it was longer. I wanted to keep reading then to find it ended like that keeps me in suspense. I'm itching to know what's going to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter

***** stars cnt wait for next ch.....good luck n plz make it soon

Great start to your story, looking forward to more soon.

Don't know why but this story has me wanting more of it and soon, nicely done.

Can't wait until the next chapter!