All Comments on 'Changed Redux Pt. 04'

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darkdance69darkdance69over 6 years ago
Amazing epic!

I love this story so much more than the original, and that is really saying something since i really liked it the first time around. I don't remember much of it originally after Tony was attacked after the job interview, so I am guessing we are reaching virgin territory finally?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Any more?

Your original series was a four-part series. Can we expect more chapters for the redux or is this the finale. This was a lovely chapter but the ending doesn't exactly seem like a conclusion

china-dollchina-dollover 6 years agoAuthor
More to come...

Thank you all so very much for reading, voting and of course for your comments!

Chapter 5 is just about done and should be posted soon! Keep checking back!

JackSilverJackSilverover 5 years ago
Really enjoying this

The slow coruption of marry is great am really looking forward to reading more

TSreaderTSreaderover 5 years ago
So very yummy!

Love it! Thank you!

JacktheBlackJacktheBlackabout 3 years ago
Very good

Want to have more chapters about the godess of lust or pleasure. Really great looking forward to seeing where this story goes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
And suddenly ...

... *poof*, it's a whole different story!

Not sure how I feel about the god(desse)s getting actively involved, tbh. Up through Ch. 3, it was a super-fun, super-sexy story. Now it promises to be, well, less so. I hope I'm wrong. (I'll finish it either way for sure.)

And darn it, why couldn't the one with six breasts have been a friendly? :-)

skygod2skygod2over 2 years ago
Still a very good story

It's still a very good story this far, but this chapter is very confusing. I hope to regain my passion for reading in the next chapters.

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