All Comments on 'Changing Her'

Is this how girls are to be treated? Don't you ever stop to think that after reading such stuff boys might get wrong ideas? Sex is also called love-making.. There's not an iota of love in this one!

You may question me why I read this. I am doing a research on the effect of internet porn on rapists.

After reading such stories, against their better judgement, guys may be tempted to try these out. And, since such stories are so damn easily available to a layman like me, I am scared to think about the kind of porn people who are "dedicated" to it find.

Please stop this. This doesn't do you any good than give a moment of satisfaction.

You have absolutely no idea about the utter humiliation and embarrassment faced by sexually harassed girls

It is my sincere request to quit writing such stories. Please channelise your creativity in a good way.

Even if one such writer stops, I'll feel obliged.

Yours,

Sam

So the hero of this tale is 18 and starting at age 16 has done 100 women. Lost me right there in the first paragraph. Grow up.

Cant be bothered to login to comment on this!

You wanted our comments.This is total rubbish. Never write again.

Repulsive.

Stupid, idiotic and demeaning to men and women. Grow up. Most women respond much better to flattery and compliments than with a weapon. I think you should never write another story again. Immature.

Interesting start with the antagonist taking the full overt method instead of the subtle coercive seduction method. What's next?

You're going to get a lot of hate, and for that I am sorry, but this is a good start. People forget this is the non-consent section where people fantasize about rape, and I must say this fantasy has hit a great beginnings of something quite great for the people here who love to fantasize about such a loss of control. Keep it going!

ya u need a good lesson in common sense and some therapy to treat that nasty side of u

Now u do have an opportunity to keep this going do some nasty but have the good guys win when its done and repay these asses for there insensitive and dangerous treatment of female classmates. So give it a go can u rescue this story

Jim

Yes, this story is absurd. But in the real world, that IS what cops, courts, and juries are for. Not every one who reads this section is a demented fiend or will become one just by reading it. Those that can not tell the difference between fantasy and reality will not be deterred simply by not reading rape fantasy literature on literotica, or by not watching violence on tv, or by not playing violent video games. Even if all of these things disappeared completely, let alone what impact this would have on people who can enjoy these things normally, guess what; real crime will still happen in the real world by people who are willing to commit it if they are able to succeed.

So much hate is directed towards some of these authors by some of the commenters at times. If you don't like it, then don't read it! Personally, I did not like the "prick" aspect to it, though it was rather expected due to the story subject. There were other aspects of the story I did like. Now, some of these stories are screwed up enough that you may wonder if some of the authors do have some issues; but perhaps also they are just writing out a fantasy (or idea) that has little bearing on their real world persona. Fantasies are just fantasies, real world behavior is not. Perhaps all the haters should realize that. After all, what does any reader in this section get out of these stories? Oh, it MUST simply be a desire to really rape (or humiliate) women.

This was great. Really, I am saving the link for this page and I will be sure to check back for updates.

A good first attempt. What I'm amused by is all the hater comments. This story is on a borderline pornographic website in a section called "nonconsent". What do they expect to find?

What I find interesting about the story, assuming the author was truthful in her bio, is that she is a young woman writing from the view point of a teen boy. However, the nature of the things visited on the girl and how presented in the story gives it the air of a masturbatory fantasy of the writer as opposed to just an interesting work of fiction. To me, knowing the author is a female, that adds an extra level of interest and excitement to the story which overcomes the impossibility of the scenerio.

I hope to see more.

Absolutely boring a waste of time

... I agree with the comment by 'Bressac'

Please continue this I'm really into it now

First brown eyes then blue eyes. Others as well.

I'm trying to get a mental picture as to how she looks. Curvy, peaches and creme porcelain complexion, possibly with an outdated haircut as commonly seen on quiverfull chicks (no, then she'd have bangs, her hair could not hide her face, scratch that) the plaid button up cowgirl shirt can be ruled out as well if it was over the head and nothing else.

Conventional wisdom would suggest this tale to be quite rapey, but since this is fantasy that doesn't really matter.

The choice of a very experienced "bad boy" stock character always makes this sort of story more enjoyable for both men and women (if one is of a more sapphic persuasion, they can still imagine the narrator as female, it wouldn't be hard.)

The typical plotholes one would find in erotic BDSMesque fiction. Did the final cut on her drawers (was cutting into her soft flesh really necessary?) sever the bands and enable their falling to the ground? Were her shoes and socks/stockings/hoisery removed along with eberything else? See though underwear doesn't do anything for me, and non see through would create more suspense (looks more enticing as well,) but I suppose in this case it adds to the storyline (or at least the mortifying comments hurled at her by the narrator.)

Since anyone could see her and recognize her, and far more so with the narrator calling her by name (much to her horror I would imagine) you would think she would be far more mortified than she was.

Him being her first kiss was a good launching point. The possibilities were endless, especially with him carrying her, taking her to a public/outdoor area and coercing her into fully disrobing... and since another cocky guy was brought in to assist the narrator, even better! Here, at least I'm assuming, you have a NiP, OON, CMNF, ENF, (that's Naked in Public, Only One Naked, Clothed Male Naked Female, Embarassed Nude Female by the way) shameful strip, "virgin horror" (or whatever you would call it) situation... embararassing molestations could have come into play. With her nipples betraying her, this is even more apparant. Cell photos of her as she strips down to nothing , fully clothed and standing behind her while she has become naked, rubbing her bare shoulders, running 2 fingers down her spine from the top of her neck down to the tailbone area directly followed by the caressing of her butt cheeks... gently stroking his hand down her back, arms, sides, legs... hugging her from behind, hands gently stroking from the upper leg/pelvis area, upper stomach, then grabbing her breasts (or grazing her erect nipples in a stimulating manner, abruptly and unexpectedly either way) you can use your imagination with what happens there ;) ...

So many psychological routes to take that would deepen her humiliation, such as the narrator and Carter (fully clothed, along with other possible accomplices) tickle torturing Brenda, (fully nude in that pulic area where anyound could be observing) while continuing with such taunts as "I see you are smiling/laughing babe, you really must be enjoying this" ... over the knee (OTK) spanking, further crying, and her tormentors taunting her with such degrading comments as "awww, poor little baby...."

Like i said, the sky is the limit!