All Comments on 'Chaperone for Beach Week'

This is not a story, it's barely a couple of paragraphs. Actually it's just a very short piece of crap!

Are you sure there isn'the something? Maybe like the story? Is this the prologue? Don'the bother with the rest.

Just one friend? The husband said: "if you have a friend you would like to bring, please do"!!! Just one? Why not at least 6? The respect this couple showed for each other equals their love: is null!!! 1*

you know it has to be good." I gave it a 5

A little less would be even better.

Gave it a one star rating for posting more trash in loving wives. Willing cuckolds are not erotic.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERYTHING RATED BY VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2! OR WHATEVER YOU CALL YOURSELF! FUCK YOU AND YOUR DEAR ANNONY IDIOCY!

eat shit annony

Ha! You just have to name the asshole and it's appears! Passing the days stalking comments... poor old sad tranny diseased cunt...

to tell dear annoy to eat shit

First as anonymous. Then as vastie. Then as bonnie. Why don't you get yourself some more names and then you can cover a lot more ground on these feedbacks. The carpet muncher has too much time on her hands. 1* for this pile of dung.

For vastiesmith2 and bonnietaylor2

Gave it a ONE to offset your five. Non-erotic stories don't belong here.

Next time make your story a full page.

David and my husband Patrick are cut from the same cloth, wonderful. Great story! xoxoxoxo Annette

What is here was excellent but it failed to deliver and ended up just a tease.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERYTHING RATED BY VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2! OR WHATEVER YOU CALL YOURSELF! IF ALL GOES WELL YOUR AIDS WILL DO ITS JOB SOON!!!

watching the old bitches dream about getting fucked. David is passing out her 51 year old pussy to the inexperienced punks because he's got younger, tighter, and more energetic pussy waiting for him back home. Or on the road. Or wherever else his wife is not around. And what is she going to do about it?

Yeah, Dave, and Patrick, are perfect husbands, perfectly understanding, and oh so generous, with your body. You stupid old cunts. There's a trade going on here, and you are just the worn old coins being tossed on the table to get what they really want, from younger, prettier, thinner women. Gotta love women's liberation. Men have been loving it for centuries.

This is begging for a continuation. Short and sweet, but I'm definitely looking for more.

Thanks!

After completing your writing use Grammar and Spelling software to locate and delete the word "that" then re-read it and build better sentences as you go. Just a thought.

I can’t recall how many mothers of girls I dated appealed to me very, very sexually. I offer wonder what could have happened. Just a thought!!

The chaperone needs a chaperone. Garbage!

or just getting in position for it. Hope whichever venereal disease she contracts is a real bitch to get rid of.

Why does this never happen to me. Once again, a great story....and I'm sure it's at least 75% true....:)

Love hearing your exploits...

Bunch of garbage.... wow over active imitation. No freaking way without drugs would this happen, then it becomes rape.