All Comments on 'Chapter 01 - Cindy's Beginning'

by igneouss

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RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleabout 13 years ago
Nice

Everybody wins through shared eroticism...just the kind of story I like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
what a story

What a story, I do think that this could or did happen.I hope Jim does not throw Cindy out because of what she did? I think she loves jim enough to be his slut wife and I think she loves being his slutwife.

BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
A good story but the theme of slut wife sharing doesn't float my boat.....

I'm glad for the prequel and it does create a background that was needed. The sex scenes were a bit short and not very erotic but I think you are growing as a writer.

b1053mutantb1053mutantalmost 10 years ago
Very Nice

Nicely told little tale.

I'm surprised that you didn't stretch out the sex a little and make it less simple and straightforward. The set up was very nicely done.

Thank you!

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