All Comments on 'Chapter 03: Daughter In-Law'

I knew this story had lots of potential as soon as I read 'Richard knew his daughter in law was a potential slut'. I hope I'm going to find her being carefully trained in the art of worshipping her Father in Law's big cock, culminating in her begging him to hard fuck her like the slut she truly is and for her Father in Law to breed her, returning her to his son only when her slut cunt is jam packed with hot jiz.

In any primitive society,where the dominant father of an extended family,rules the roost and in animal kingdom.

He would do well to remember what famous sons have killed their fathers thru history. I would kill the SOB with extreme prejudice and make him aware of what I am doing. The writer is the real contoiling no good bastard

...of shit.

please keep writing. i love the story line. it is so hot that she plays hard to get and even hotter that richard just rams into her.

This is One of the best stories I have ever read! Why did you stop?

An 11 is what I would rate it on a 1 to 10 scale.

would like to know more about the slut's training

And this one was a tease. Not sure why you didn't do more parts as for left off in the story after you built it up so well!

Would love for you to return to these characters!

My stepfather screw my exwife, and she enjoy it. When I found it divorce follow. as i find later she was screwing with him many more years.

I am all wet after reading... Elin

Excellent story. Looking forward to the next part

Ganjaisbad, this is a very nice story, it has taken you a long time for the next chapter, any chance of seeing it?

Good story, next one pls

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE IS THERE GOING TO A CHAPTER4?

Please write more

Write the next chapter please,, Good story line, next chapter please..

Wow!!!

Hawt!