All Comments on 'Charlene Ch. 01'

Wow an elderly couple with a cell phone in 1986....

Yes I read that detail at least three times not catching the cell phone as a story dater. They are so common now it's hard to remember when they weren't. Also her age is off because when I actually wrote the story it was the right age but as time progresses its out more and more. Sorry didn't catch that detail until it was pending! I will revise this at some point soon.

Cheers,

Nymfoholic

I think of myself as a MAN and I do believe that excuse for a human should be removed of wasting our oxygen!

This is pretty fucked.

I gave it a 5 but I have a few suggestions. The buildup was great but there should have been a little more details to the size of the penis going into her and also some about how tight she was as a virgin. i also thought the orgasms were a little rushed.