All Comments on 'Charlotte's Story Ch. 01'

Very good start. Hope you continue with this

Great start, please keep going xx

You've certainly piqued my interest. I look forward to more.

well you have broken the ice so now its time to go for that next part of im sure a very hot horny next part. of charlotte's story

Would like to hear more about how it started and where it goes.

you told us that you tend to be a little wordy. My opinion is that you might be a little too hard on yourself. This seemed like just the right amount of description to begin this story. And it doesn't take being female to see why you started this way. I can't wait for more. Charlotte seems to need to learn that professional lives and personal lives should be completely different. Most successful women are powerful ON THE JOB.... but gladly give up that power when they leave the office. 5 stars.

And I absolutely loved your writing; I don't know why you think you are not a good writer. It was so natural and real, compared to a lot of stories on here. I actually felt like I was there. I really hope you post again.

I expect you to continue this wonderful tale, writing often and in the same detail. You are not to criticize your effort or your skills - the trolls on this site will do that for you. Your obvious honesty and desire to please add significant credibility to your writing and I demand the same in future chapters. Hold nothing back.

Good so far

Thank you.

Thank you all for your encouraging comments! I am so glad you liked me, both you who posted here and you who send me e-mail feedback. I am working on the next one now.

Kisses!

Charlotte.

Ton8ty made an excellent comment. I've copied and pasted his words: "Your obvious honesty and desire to please add significant credibility to your writing". I felt that those words are worth repeating. Not only did you write a story about a submissive, you wrote in a beautifully submissive way. Great job and absolutely lovely. Thank you.

Amazing. You had me mesmerized with the ease of the story. I couldn't stop reading. I couldn't wait for the next word...the next sentence...I wish it had been a book. You remind me of myself. So in tune with the feelings and thoughts of others and yourself. Good Work! And I look so forward to hearing more about your journey. Kudos!

Oh my, I hadn't read comments here in forever. Thank you all sooooo much!

Charlotte

I read your story and I look forward to reading more. I am at this time where Paul and you started out. My Master saw the submissive in me and I am just starting out. But there is nothing I wouldn't do to please him. Thank you for sharing your story I hope you write more.

Well written. And very sexy.

You need an editor.