All Comments on 'Chemistry'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The perfect romance

It was a quick one for this category but it delivered just what wee need and hopefully you'll continue with those two in the future. it would be a shame to leave it like that now that they finally found to each other in the best way possible.

5*

trigudistrigudisabout 7 years ago
Very Nice

A quick and tender scene captured eloquently.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good story

Many work and study buddies are reluctant to admit their true feelings. It is much better to take a chance than regret it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

You are a very talented writer and I hope you continue with these two... great story.

ag2507ag2507about 7 years ago
Just a small knitpick

Doctoral theses get written before and during experiments and completed after. If they didn't start writing until they finished their experiments the thesis would never get completed. They are a lot of words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good but

Far to short no build up

ukdukeukdukeover 6 years ago
Nice little shorty!

Not a romance. But nice all the same.

Romance is about the journey this was about the destination.

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