All Comments on 'Chicken Ch. 01'

Loved your story, please continue

I loved your story hope for more

please, more like this -smiles-

Hottest thing I have ever read. Please write more like this

Would love to see it expanded to the mom.

In spite of the unusual (to say the least) title, Chicken is actually a fairly good love story. It has a good storyline, but the introduction is much too brief, and the ending much too rushed. More extensive character development would also be a plus. The romantic element in the story is very well-written, with just the right tender atmosphere needed for good romance storytelling.

The best, most exciting story on the web.

So exciting, just what two lovers might get up to after they have enjoyed intercourse together a number of time, & are reckless.

Choosing a fertile time, & without birth control this is Russian Roulette.

I hope the author rites many more exciting "sexcapades".

I always enjoy this author's work. Really well written stories and not unduly twisted, like fantasies involving kinks of mostly normal people. The commenter who spoke of "sexcapades" captured it well. Amusing reads for those old(er) readers like myself - 71- who an still recall the kinky side of old times.