All Comments on 'Chip Wendy Dan Nancy Carl - Story 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

i'd love to be dani in this story so so much. i'm trans so this story ticks heaps of my boxes. please keep this story going as long as you can. thank you heaps.

BrokenPenisBrokenPenisabout 6 years agoAuthor

Would it make sense to have Dani go to the doctor and do a complete transition? I'm thinking that comes with the new house...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nympho Riz

All the Riz sex made for an entertaining addition to the series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
PUNCTUATION ERROR

Can you go back and correct the price Chip was paying for the new house. You started off with $1.950 million but accidentally ended putting $1,950. It made a jarring note in an otherwise good story,

chip

BrokenPenisBrokenPenisabout 6 years agoAuthor
Punctuation error...

Hey, ya know, it's all about the writing... Nobody said there would be MATH involved.

Will fix, thanks for the catch.

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I enjoy writing about the experience of transition. I wonder what it would feel like to be a woman, to be taken care of like a woman. To be "taken" as a woman.