The story could greatly benefit from a little more thought before typing so as to use less of "&" at the frequency now. With a little extra thought and planning many could be removed and the sentences clearer in meaning.
I took to writing erotica for the reason that I would have sole control on how the story ends and what my characters will do. However I was surprised to see that some characters have a mind of their own and act accordingly beyond my original intentions. Case in point were Lind...