All Comments on 'Chole and the Duke Ch. 01'

Loved it!! Name switch for one of the servants/maids?

I thought it was Maggie, not Megan, and who is Rachel? So far so good. Waiting for the next chapter.

Yeah, sorry about the name mix-up! I thought I fixed that, but I guess I forgot. Hopefully it's not too distracting.

Lovely. Takes me back to my teen fantasies of being a damsel in distress. Lol.

Please don't stop...need more of story.

Read it while playing with myself. Sooo goood

Love this time piece. Personally, I very much appreciate the details-- young blonde with pigtails, dirty talking, humiliation with the father, etc. I love your ideas so far, great read! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Please write more!

I can’t wait for part 2! Clever and creative - the Duke’s “virtue test” was brilliant. Now that this girl knows she’s a natural whore, she will be free to perform accordingly.

I only hope the Duke will place his young slut on all fours while he uses her mouth and canes her elegant backside. Nothing quite like a thick cock to muffle a maiden’s pleadings!