All Comments on 'Chores for the Neighbor Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A Correction & a Suggestion

I enjoyed your story. The word should be "reeked," not "wreaked." If Mrs. Samuels spread a towel under her, she wouldn't need to change the sheets every time she entertained a neighbor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Didn't like it

It was okay until father-son thing started, then it got creepy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
saw that coming

I saw that Judy and Marty thing coming: goose and gander.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

"Reeked" (smelled) of sex, not "wreaked" (damaged)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Garbage

1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Anonymous fucks

If u don't like cheating stories then don't fucking read them

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Kind of boiler plate reciprocal cheating plot. Silly plot and boring sex.

I can understand why the spouses are already ahead of the game. At least no one has to worry about ruining their marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Marty's fucking the neighbours wife. How cliche.

Regardless, one does not justify the other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Haven't been following story too closely

And, don't know the ages of everyone in this story. But, would it be irony if Marty & Judy have been long time loves and, Jason is actually Marty's son??? Dun, dun, da, oh the drama... lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Reply to hypocritical porn site reader comment by Anonymous 09/17/17

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DiscoveringUtopiaDiscoveringUtopiaover 5 years ago
A story with absolutely no redeeming social values...

5*

erotikoserotikosover 5 years ago
Spot on!

The comment by DiscoveringUtopia is spot on! Readers looking for redeeming social values should read War and Peace. Those seeking to be intrigued and aroused should read this piece and its companion pieces of erotic fiction.

happyjack921happyjack921about 5 years ago
Liked It

Last few sentence shows that a part 3 is needed;

Jason had gone off to shower while I helped Joe clean up the bed. "Marty is out of town?" Joe asked. "Yeah, he had to go across the state to St. Louis for the weekend for work." "That's funny - that is where Judy is."

Is this a circumstance or is more to it?

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 5 years ago
Yeah

last sentence made the story. Busted out laughing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Értéke ennek a szennyes írásnak mínusz 1 csillag...

Ez az írás egy minősíthetetlen szennyes firkálmány!!!

kmreaderkmreaderabout 4 years ago
That’s where Judy is!

Love it! Would be fun to see how this all washes out.

mattenwmattenwalmost 4 years ago

I hope she becomes infected with HIV and dies a long painful death!

timrivtimrivalmost 4 years ago

No one in this story has any redeeming qualities all bunch of cheaters and perverts.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Stinks of a cuck story... Both are wrong; but she is worse for the threesome...

widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 2 years ago
Dad and son?

Started out like a nice srory, but then chapter two really left a lot to be delighted about. Why father and son? Is the father so desperate that he has to horn in on his son? Lori should have told Joe that she would be ending it with Jason and tellinh him wgy and how his dad had fotced himself on her ending their affair. Rhen let Jason and Joe wprk it out between them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved the story. The last sentence made it a 5.

Ocker53Ocker53almost 2 years ago

Not my type of story

goodshoes2goodshoes2over 1 year ago

The last few sentences were a laugh riot. Perfect.

26thNC26thNC12 months ago

Taylor wrote some great stories, but this ain’t one of them.

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