All Comments on 'Claiming Katy Ch. 17'

So many subs/slaves and one sadist who may not be a domme proper. What a tangled web. Rudderless ships flounder. Sophie is collecting quite a harem. Can she manage it to everyone's benefit? I am concerned about he leadership skills.

You have certainly dripped out the fact there is a story here amid the abundance of s/m. Will you be developing the ladies and the story into something fuller and more complete?

Not good.

Your writing is elegant at times, complete sexy at times, brutally clear sometimes. It was a challenge to approach this lengthy series with an open mind as the subject matter & the eloquent telling made my cringe at times. At some points the discipline was so intense that I had to stop reading to catch my breath, calm my fears & clear my head. That speaks to how powerfully you write because I am not a squeamish person. But in keeping my mind open & trusting your gifted writing, I learned much about myself & the emotional meaning of BDSM. I am thankful you told this story & grateful I was able to engage & see it through.

I am sorry my initial comments were so mean spirited. In the end this story enriched my understanding of the BDSM sexual expression & I learned a lot about the elements of love and devotion in a comitted relationship based on fully trusting the one you give yourself to. This is stellar work.

XOXO

Taylor

Loving it. Excited and wet by it. Cum hard with it. Over and over. Thanks :)