- BDSM
- Claiming Raven
- Page 8
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Raven jerked, she tensed, then she climaxed. Her whole body bucked once, then again and then she gasped and lay back.
"Fast." She whispered. She opened her eyes. "You, god, you do it to me! I don't know how but god, you do!"
After connection over the non-chemical medium of the internet, it was wonderful to find that the mind sometimes does know the heart and gets it right, to say nothing of the body. I stretched out between her legs, lay down on her and when she turned her head, I kissed her neck. It was such a natural thing, exposing her neck like that, so I bit her, gently but then harder, then sucked at her skin, marking her, putting my mark on her while my cock soaked in the bubbling heat of her cunt.
"Sir." She added the word after several heaving breaths.
"Yes, Raven?" I said, asking for more.
"I'm your woman." She says. A shiver runs through me.
"Yes." I say, feeling her body under me rippling with the pleasure of our connection. Then, finally, I ask her about her flight, the news, her family, all of it. There, mounted inside her pussy, my hard cock throbbing with the pleasure of our connection, we talked. And talked. And talked. I remained hard and she remained wet. But then, in the moment when we hesitated, I kissed her.
"You're mine." I whispered, rising up to look down into her blue eyes glinting in the dull light.
"Yes," Raven responded. "You have claimed me. I am yours."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 6 years agoPage 4 (near end of page) stopped me from reading this. A DOM--as in D/s would not leave his sub alone and not "safe". Especially if he just met her for the first time, to go down and get a knife to cut panties...come on! Somehow you missed the point in D/s. I know it is a "story" and not "true" D/s. But even a tiny bit of research would show you not all girls will drop to their knees within moments of meeting "him". D/s is about "trust". With her trusting him to make the right/safe/sane decisions, and he not breaking that trust, yet pushing her to the edge of her limits and his own. A "first meet" is important--finding out who each other is--and feeling the "vibes" to see if there is a physical connection. I'm sorry, I could not read the rest of the story...sorry. Otherwise your other stories are VERY good and I recommend them. My apologies for being critical.
kyrie11eover 6 years agoI love the view into the mind of man who finds himself to be Dominant. An honest look at the journey. Thank you.
DepravedPrincessalmost 7 years agoOutstanding attention to detail... thoughts, thoughts about thoughts, nuances, the interplay between intent and reality... An enthralling read. Thank you. :)
soppingwetpantiesalmost 7 years agoThe first story I've read of yours. You are an outstanding writer. And hot.
