All Comments on 'Claire's Visit to the College Doctor'

Well written and erotic first story. Thank you for sharing.

Great start, Soph.... would have liked to have seen more from his POV as you went along, and not just at the very end.... thought you could have been kinkier, crueler, edgier, and maybe had him use a speculum (both vaginal and anal)... the door open and old janitor was excellent, but what would she have suffered if others walked by, stopped, looked, commented and took pics?....thought he could have embarrassed her more by pointing out her arousal and making her explain it or pushing her to orgasm.... excellent pace....just wondered why you were so nice?? Would he follow up by inviting her back...for different and even more in-depth and invasive research?? SO many opportunities!! Chapter 2??

Lots of ways for this to go. Does he have a naughty nurse?