All Comments on 'Clara - English'

No emotion to connect with. Nothing to attract or arrouse. The characters get more incomprehensible as the story unfolds. The somewhat staccato writing style doesn't add to thie picture. This story isn't going anywhere - except, perhaps, to the NC category.

but as shown by the movie Lost in Translation, I am not sure we are reading what the author believes he posted.

His bio page has the following statement:

"Vizitand "obiectivul" si vazand cat de agramati si neglijenti pot fi unii "scriitori", pur si simplu m-am hotarat sa scriu!...

Noi, romanii, suntem oameni destepti, asa ca ar fi pacat sa ne lasam sa fim facuti de ras de niscaiva... nu-i numesc, sa nu-i jignesc!"

the best both Google and Bing Translate can do is:

"Visiting the "objective" and seeing how careless illiterate may be some "writers" simply I decided to write! ...

We Romanians are smart people, so it would be a shame to let ourselves to be embarrassed by niscaiva ... do not call, do not hurt them!"

I am glad Scorpio58 has simply decided to write! I just wish we knew for sure what his message for us was. Until he secures the services of an editor who is familiar with both English and Romanian, I fear we will be left in the editing bay wondering what he meant.