All Comments on '"Clare" Unconventional Aunt Ch. 02'

Very good story. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Glad to see a story that is just about two people. If you don't like it STOP READING! 243 Keep up the good work!

Not boring. Don't mind the troll. Encore!

I am really enjoying the story, my only criticism, and it's just a small one. I find it very distracting that Jay goes back and forth between calling his mom and step-dad by their first names and his parents, it's just a little thing that, personally, takes me out of the story a bit when I have to remember who he referring to when he calls them Rhonda and Mike......But I am really enjoying it otherwise.

the whole story was great I wish there were more I could not and did not want to

stop reading this when I had to work then got back on kept readding it disserves and higher rateing the 5 should more like a 10 hope you wright more loved it.

Dumbass had it cuming

Glad Odell is gone. (or is he?)

Oh how I wish authors would learn the difference between setting and sitting. but that is just me.

You will find Spice for dessert.

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Lovely, just, lovely.

No. No No! You can't stop here!