by NakedDan
You write very well, and your stories are hot. Waiting for the next one!
I love your writing. It is extremely sexy and arousing. You tell the story very well. And I love that Dan is with Liz; they are really good together. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
Really enjoyed this series of stories! Hope you continue on with the adventures of this young man!
I was really enjoying this series. Please don't let it end here! I felt that there were a lot more activities for Dan to take part in I was really enjoying this series. Please don't let it end here! I felt that there were a lot more before this series reached a natural conclusion!
Just please confirm that there will enable chapter 8 at some point ?
I enjoyed this series and wondered if you have thought of writing further adventures of Dan, Liz and Katherine?
Fine writing here , need more of your fine work as others have said !
I can't believe that Katherine spend an entire summer watching a well hung guy jerk off in her private office and never once even pinch a nipple, let alone play with herself in any way. Even the most controlled woman had to be showing some sore of arousal!
Dan,
You've built up so much expectation, you really must write up the big demonstration with Liz and Dan with the audience of 200 !
This story is just too good to leave it hanging in mid air like this.
I realise it's been 5 years since chapter 7 appeared, but please think about producing chapter 8 and giving it a 'proper' conclusion ?
PLEASE !
Rapier
So someone fucks with your emotions, you confront them and tell them off, and then YOU apologize?
I was int this story until he handed over his nuts to his new girlfriend and Dr Strangelove...
Just goes to show that you don't have to have a small dick to be a cuck...
A brilliant story, remarkable in many ways - superbly craftex, excellent pacing so as to draw the reader into the narrative and pull them along with it, the tension in the relationships, the very hot sex, and the uncertainty about how ig will turn out. You included subtle clues as to whether, the it would finally be Dan and Jessica, or Dan and Liz. Katherine remained an enigma, the pivot around whom everything turned, and yet I didn't feel the final scenes completely meshed. Overall however, a great work.
I agree with all who clamor for the big finale! Perhaps culminating in Liz being impregnated, in public!