All Comments on 'Clayton's New Learning Experience'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
lucky Clayton

I just wish it had been me instead of Clayton

redbunsredbunsalmost 12 years ago
Where is the sequel?

We've waited so long for the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep persons consistent

It's distracting that you switch back and forth between second- and third-person pronouns when referring to the young man. Choose one and then stick to it.

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