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All Comments on 'Clayton's New Learning Experience'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep persons consistent

It's distracting that you switch back and forth between second- and third-person pronouns when referring to the young man. Choose one and then stick to it.

redbunsredbunsabout 12 years ago
Where is the sequel?

We've waited so long for the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
lucky Clayton

I just wish it had been me instead of Clayton

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