All Comments on 'Clean Sweep'

This was a hot story, wish my workout buddy was like that. I guess I need to go to another gym.

Like your story, are you going to continue it, you left off like you would.

not original, not well or carefully written, and a 5/8 or 6/8 in diameter penis would be really skinny. Might be good for ass-fucking, and a major oddity, but it is a ridiculous image.

Your work is good. The story is familiar but then thats not unusual. Your wording is ok but watch your style a bit more. I fell your at 85% so please contine. I will be looking for a continuation.

I liked your story a lot, and I hope you'll write a sequel. I liked the interaction between the guys, the heart-to-heart, and the sensual feeling of the story.

I'll keep my eyes open for more of your stories.

Good storyline and character build up. You desperately need to put the dialogue in parentheses and Separate them from the storyline. Little more detailed sexing's would also be welcomed.