All Comments on 'Clinical Trials Ch. 04'

by KegRoller

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So much potential

Congratulations on a great story with tons of creative potential! Haven't read a lot of female orgasm denial/control stories here and this was a blast to read! I feel the pacing, plot and character development is spot on in this chapter with the right amount of detail. Can't wait to find out what kinds of torture and humiliation her roommate has in store for Brittney when she finally masters the software controlling her body's response to stimulation.

Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

At some point in time I'd love to see Brittney, give Holly her just deserts. Getting her back in some way or form similar to how Holly acts towards her.

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
i love your style

this is so erotic and well written.

CdJenniferHCdJenniferHalmost 5 years ago
Masterful

As this story progresses I am getting more and more desperate to be summoned before Dr Drake, maybe she would like a sissyboy to experiment with!

TrstxxxTrstxxxalmost 3 years ago

Very erotic...permanent and uncontrollable. Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am disappointed that the nanomaterial was not applied to the anus.

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