All Comments on 'Clueless Wife'

Ending is good and a little unexpected. Brought a smile to my face. Those are hard to come by!!

This is a good story. A little humor and a great ending.

Actually kinda funny. The twist at the end was great.

interesting little gems you can find lying around on the shelves. nicely written, very original, a good read. a fan always.

You have a nice droll style. I liked the part about interrogating her pussy but not finding anything out.

Regards, DJ

It's well-written, it's funny, and miracle of miracles, it's original! Damn fine job.

this was great! its lite, fun & i quite enjoyed the flip at the end.... clue is among my top ten movies so it was funny to come across a "form" of it in a well written story. Thanks!

One hell of a convoluted story. You had me convinced that she was a cheating slut. Way to go, I loved it. Thanks

So you write a story that is just a lie and ha ha we were dumb enough to read it. That is just bullshit, not writing skill. anon jerry

very nice misdirection

to allow for a better way. TK U MLJ LV NV

I wish it would have been built up a little more. It could have been an even wilder ride. That said, a very entertaining flash story.

I thought something else was being telegraphed. I thought in the end all her errands were going to end up being innocuous and that he was overlooking the obvious...his vasectomy had failed, and she was pregnant with his baby.

I like yours better.

Kudos to you. Great change up story.

Good fun read thanks for sharing.

I think the story was very well written but I didn't like it. Sorry.

Mildly entertaining. I guessed the "Clue" angle and it went downhill from there.

funny. keep up the work. THANK YOU

This was a creative effort. I do not understand why it got low grades! Or do I?

Perhaps we are too hung up on revenge stories around here!

... a different type of story. Even the name was incredibly on the money. Thanks for the fun.

Very original and very entertaining. I like to see couples playing games to keep things interesting. Makes for a very long and successful marriage.

now that is what i call a marriage when you can play games like that for fun

The readers were the ones clueless...good ending...

5 & FAV

gave you a 5!!

Fun reading...By the way of the writing it had to be a catch, but nevertheless it was a good one..4*

Just a fun read. It is nice to see one now and then that shows a couple just having a good time together! Bravo!

and their made up games. TK U MLJ LV NV

Liked it all, especially the title!

This is Excellent, Funny, and Most of all It's Enjoyable!

Anyway you get My endorsement 5 ★ WOOF!

Funny

Though I have to give say the ol "fake pregnant to hide the fact you actually used protection" argument was a long shot but she played that well too.

Honestly, this is a damn fine story made better by your humor and ingenuity. Thanks for writing

You got me with that one. Enjoyed your story.

...nice job, enjoyed this story very much. Thanx!

Loklie

It made me smile. I can usually see twists coming. This one got me. It's also well written. Congratulations.

Very funny ending.

Open marriages can work.

I'm not sure I could survive a wife like that, but I think I like her! That was rather sweet, after it wound me up...

What kind of scumbag would marry a woman and not tell her beforehand that he had a vasectomy?

I bet that if he had been honest with her they would never have married.

Nice little twist at the end. Definitely not the same ol same ol story.

Now that was a fun and awesome story!! Well done my good man, well done.

Sadly though I must make a well needed comment on someone who makes the mean things I say about some readers seem to be for good reason. Either reading is optional for them or their comprehension skills are sorely lacking

The anon from 9 months ago "What kind of scumbag would marry a woman and not tell her beforehand that he had a vasectomy?

I bet that if he had been honest with her they would never have married.

Fucking waste of time