All Comments on 'Co-ed's Extra Credit Ch. 01'

Again another author who doesn't know the simple basic versions of some terms.

Coed = female student

co-ed = mixed group of male and female students

The terms coed vs. co-ed didn't bother me. Neither did the few other spelling and grammatical errors. I knew what you meant. What did bother me was that you rushed this. It needed more build up by her teasing him for a while. Maybe she could have taken her panties off while sitting in class and folded her paper around them when she gave it to him. The sex itself was a wham bam thank you mam.

Take your time and give us a story not just a sex scene.

You really need to work on your dialogue. People just don't talk the way you write it. Try listening to real people.

Can't count ALL the mistakes!!!