All Comments on 'Coffee House Pick Up Four Later'

by Lost Soul

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
This was great.

This was a great story. I wish you continue it. I will check back daily for future chapters. It would be nice to read some intimate incidents between the mom and son and a third person like

1 - the waxing scene in Mom's Camping Trip by SmithCommaJohn

2 - the shoe salesman scene in Playing with Mom Ch. 03 by alwayswantedto

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Thanks for the sequel!

It took NINE years to get here, but I'm glad you finally continued the story. Now, of course, you'll have to write a third chapter. Since you ended this story with such a "cliffhanger" (Sally having guessed that Roger is Diana's son), you're going to have to give us a chapter that explains how she guessed, and then goes on to Diana and Roger moving to some new town (wherever his first job after college takes them) and settling down to live as husband and wife.

Please - ignore any requests to involve some third party (male or female) in the relationship between Diana and Roger. That would ruin the overall story, and you have already written that Diana only has eyes (and love) for her Roger.

Lost SoulLost Soulabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your support

I am happy with all the feed back on this story. I will try and do a part 3 soon.

Thanks again.

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