All Comments on 'Coffee with Danielle'

by BigDaddy4u2nit3

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
An Awesome First Story

This was a wonderful story and I can't wait for you to contribute some more. About my only "feedback" is that the time Daniel took in the bedroom to transform into Danielle was a bit on the optimistic side. When a boy transforms herself for her Daddy, it usually takes a lot longer than a few minutes, as much as Daddy might like it to be less! :-) Been there, done that! LOL And more than once have had to call out "I'm nearly ready. I think you'll find the wait was worth it!"

BuildaworldBuildaworldover 6 years ago
Amazing

I loved this story. I really would like to see more like this from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This was a beautiful story!! Please write more

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