by shecheats
I'm sorry but if this is true then you are a piece of shit! The cheating is bad enough. You can't really love your husband (regardless of what you claim) if you do stuff with a fucking kid that you won't even do with him. You know the one who deals with all your bullshit perspectives and all of your feminine crap. You know the father of your kids. Not one single word of regret. To be honest that is HUGE fucking statement!!!
Kind of aimless too. The characters aren't connected in a purposeful way.
I hope to read more of your stories I truly enjoyed your writing and look forward to more
And I know I would like to hear more about the professor and the graduate program!
5 stars!
The story was good but the misspellings almost made me stop in the first few paragraphs. Well, maybe not misspellings but you wear "clothes" not "close".
An editor would catch this kind of thing. Keep working on it, you have the potential!
to hear more of your thoughts during critical times. Where you conflicted? Did things go the way you wanted? An y guilt? Will you confess? Will you make it up to your hubby by better sex? The story was also short. It can be an exciting story with a few tweeks.
Yes - the close instead of clothes gets repeated in the second part of this. Also you don't eat diner you eat dinner - good stories though
With lines like this:
"..we got to know each other chatting about where we lived, work, families and other non-important things..."
So work and family are "not important things". Oookaaaay if you say so.
"Diner" is a place.
That meal you eat in the evening is spelled "dinner".
there's been a few chortles on LW lately. Well done to the collage processor..3*