All Comments on 'Come and Get Me Ch. 01'

by Amela

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ugh

awful. Your writing sucks. I couldn't even make it past the 3rd paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nicely done

I thought this was rather good. Definitely set the stage for some excitement!

bagsy1bagsy1over 14 years ago
Nice

eagerly waiting for the next chapter. ignore the first comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ohhh

I can't wait for the games to begin. Please don't keep us waiting long.

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