All Comments on 'Coming Back'

Incredible Story.

loved the juxtaposition of the two women and their age differences - let's have more of this please.

The sex was good and the story was ok, but the typos were so numerous and so distracting that it spoiled the good stuff. You can write ok and express yourself well, but, Geez! get yourself a proofreader!

Examples: "Grace" is not capitalized several times, quotation marks missing in a few places, and a couple of phrases that make no sense in context.