All Comments on 'Command Ch. 01'

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pois11pois11about 7 years ago
Good, but...

not really mind control, is it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
good story but miscategorized

I would agree that this is submission but not actually mind control. It is a good situation for a story, I'd like to read part 2 and see where it goes.

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