All Comments on 'Companion Fare Ch. 01'

I think this is worth continuing with

Great start. Please continue. Will the husband also become submissive?

Please post more of this story soon.

I would like to see where this is going. Also I would like to know what happened on the trip. This story deserves at least one more chapter.

I am very interested to see where you are going with this. Its a good story so far. And you havn't had any cheating wife with other men stuff so far. I will be waiting to see where you take this ....Good luck

The husband and Donna need to discuss what can and can't happen to his wife during their trips. It would be fantastic if the husband would be a little more dominant in their home life. Don't make him a sub-wimp that lets anyone do anything to his wife. He should have serious veto rights to anything that he doesn't want his wife doing. If Donna violates them, then she should be punished.

I've really liked evals22 other series and this has started with great promise. Looking forward to future installments and I especially hoping the humiliation is inventive and innovative.

He is a real wimp to let someone control his "loving" wife with him there.

About reading about old farts and dried up old hides.

SUCKS!! The use of the control is what pisses me off. Commanding like you would a dog.

As a husband I woulda slapped Donna up side the head, I think. Something, anyway, to let her know she should not have treated my wife as she had.

No, sorry.

Just one more horseshit story for LW.

Wade through the build up till you get to the last chapter. It builds and builds to a most satisfactory conclusion.