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You have to continue this story soon.

You HAVE to continue this story!!! It was hot!! Can't wait to read the next episode.

We are pleased to inform you that your pilot has been approved.

this story was very hot, its what i like to read, please continue it, maybe have Mandy walk in and see him jerking off, and they do the mutual masturbateing thing? That storie was so Hot,,, Please keep it going.

This story has an excellent build up and leaves plenty of directions that the story can now go. It would be a crime to not develop the story into an excellent series of senarios where the characters can inter-react. I look forward to the next instalment.

You've been mentioned on the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout Forum on Lit's Bulletin Board

good writing and good plot. keep up the good work.

You musn't stop now this one was GREAT

great story, want much more!!!

also, would love to see a pic of girl that inspired such a hot tale!!

That was one of the best stories that I have read in a long time. Congratulations I cant wait for the next part please post soon.

just bloody brilliant

i liked this a lot.. a pilot, a bit of a tease, but a great start. im not usually a series fan, but finishing out this plotline is a great idea.

great story waiting for the sequel

I want to see where this goes!

This was a great start to what promises to be a wonderful story of sexy adventures. I started of hating it, but ended loving it.

Nookiehunter

what the fuck has this got to do with incest there was no incest what so ever what an asshole

The concept has some potential; but it wasn't realized in this submission.

i liked it alot pants are 50 times smaller now he-he

Great lead up to what would be a great story.

2 women & 2 men in the house could lead to much adventure.

Needs another few chapters

I'd like to see where this story goes and how it develops, and definitely what kind of creative imagery writing about sex you come up with.

unbelievable and unrealistic seems she would have found a friend to live with instead of moving. as is it was totally rushed and not very interesting in any way.

Wouldn't really calm that incest or taboo. Poor story line

Good story, waiting for next chapter. Thanks

Why is this in the incest category?

Please a lot more