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gnfgnfabout 20 years ago
Wow!

Now that was a twist. I didn't comment on the first story since I just read it because you said to understand this one the other was needed.

Loved it. About time David took some responsibility for his own actions. Having a beard in the guise of a wife so that his parents wouldn't know he is gay and then blowing up at her when she finally has an affair just cuts it.

Just a spoiled little boy as she said.

George

dsidedsidealmost 20 years ago
Nice twist

but not belieavable. If it was believable she would still be a slut for breaking her vows. As for her gutless husband, may he cotract Aids and have to have his parents take care of him.

I know, not a very nice comment so don't burn me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Two

Cheating Sluts

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Damn

I have to say this is fucking terrible.

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