by iwallbt
You're a sad little man who if you were smart you would change schools quickly and neveer see her again!!
for a male to act like a girl isn't the normal way to act.you aren't acting like a male.your parents needed to have a talk with you about the way a male should act.
Why do stories about women cuckolding their men turn me on? I don't know, but they do! Laurie can make Mark do almost anything now and I for one hope she does.
If he'd stand up and assert himself, this guy could really have this girl, and that's obviously what she wants and respects. He thinks that by being meek, he is pleasing her, but she obviously doesn't find that particularly exciting. The guy who has little regard for her gets the good stuff, and our "hero" gets to lick up after him but so far not to get more than an HJ. If our hero would tell her to fuck off and not come back until she wants to treat him like a man, she might come around and at least other people would know he has a backbone when word got around. Instead he apparently going to marry her as her second-rate toy as a ploy when she isn't having real sex with the men she actually desires and respects.
ASK THE "REAL MEN" WHO LEFT NEGITIVE COMMENTS ON YOUR STORY WHY THEY ENJOY EATING PUSSY. THEY PROBABLY DON'T EVEN REALIZE IT IS BECAUSE THEY ARE SHOWING THEIR SUBMISSION TO WOMEN. WHY ARE THEY SO AFRAID TO TAKE IT FURTHER. AND FURTHER, AND FURTHER, AND FURTHER.
it threatens their sense of masculinity to be treated this way by a woman, which to me shows more insecurity then the character in the story..
Don't forget, it's turning HIM on to be treated like this.. there many men who are very powerful in their everyday lives, but enjoy being the submissive in their private lives.. it's a kind of balance..
I for one think it's hot!
Any whore would do this for the sick minds who need it - why marry one? Perhaps the answer is that even a whore would get sick of it after a while!
Perhaps its the degredation - the demeaning that some males crave - mistreating thier male ego - making them feel lower than human turns them on - it is a very sick thing for a woman to do and for a male to like being dehumanized and disrespected in this very depraved personal manner.
Well author, you garner two things with this story of cuckolding - a few sick readers who need pitiful disrespect and very low regard from normal people who liken this among the sickest type of FETISH - say pissing in your loved one's mouth - now there is another method of respect and love. Erotic or sensual only in a numb jaded sorid mind.
How are the scores holding up? It will get worse the longer you keep this in Loving Wives instead of in FETISH where it belongs. Then get some help soon.
People ... this a story, not real life. I'm sure the author loves your advice on what he should do with his girlfriend, his insecurities, etc., etc., but it's a freakin' story. Do you like it or not, that's all that's required of you. Anyway, I thought the story was great, keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing this story continue.
Take a note and follow your own advice! However, this is a comment area and as you have the right to say that you like cuckolding stories - others have the right to say cuckolding is sick stuff for sick people and why this belongs in Fetish.
You can't have it both ways (you can comment and we can't?) Grow up little one - Say - you did know the straight voting is in another area?
Unlike the author and certain readers, real men don't care for these stories. The title is misnamed. It is not cockold (meaning someone else fucks the wife). Instead it is humiliation. Men that need to be humiliated are sickos.
Please continue with this story! You're a good writer and I just love good femdom stories, and this is shaping up to be one. I can't wait to hear of your further adventures.
This series is interesting enough to watch for the 3rd installment. One minor flaw is Greg's car. In Part 1, he drives a Mustang. In Part 2, it's a Camaro.
Also, I think this story would have worked better if the cuckold hadn't been so "easy." Not all cuckold's are such wimpy wusses, but this one sure is!
Frankly, I have a hard time believing that this is a true account of the author's relationship. It's exceedingly rare in real life for beautiful women to be attracted to men who exhibit such wussy behavior.
However, whether a cuckold is motivated by arousal via submission/humiliation or by arousal via the sperm competition theory (yes, that's right, look it up and do your homework), I prefer seeing a budding cuckold struggle emotionally with the prospects of becoming a confirmed, and eventually a hard-wired cuckold. It just makes for a far more interesting story, in my opinion.
As far as all the cuckold critics here are concerned, you all must be getting SOME level of personal payoff for reading these stories. Otherwise, why waste your time reading the stories in the first place... and then even MORE time composing your cuckold-bashing comments? Are your lives so lacking that you have nothing better to do with your time? This in itself exhibits whiney and wussy behavior!
This story reminds me of when I met my wife to be. Very similar circumstances and very similar events,
What happens next? Does she make a habbit of calling him after sex for a good pussy licking?
thats just like me and my wife i have never been allowed sex with her but am allowed to watch she had a lover when we married and it was a condition that i never would have sex this was her fantasy also she wanted three children by different men whom i would bring up as my own
on our wedding night her boy friend said to me i am glad you two are married i dont have to use a condom any more need less to say he consomiated our marrage
"Oh my God, I nearly fainted with jealousy." Yeah. Sure. Jealous of the WIFE, maybe. It was obvious with the first story and more so with the second, the hubby secretly longs to suck cum not from the whores' pussy but straight from the dick. Gay author, gay story, and should be in the gay category. As for the commenters who remark that they are in similar situations, might I say they have my pity...and my contempt (not that I'm terribly worried about offending them. Is it even possible to offended the nutless wonders, and if so, what could they possibly do other than get their panties in a bunch and cry a lot?) It's damned hard to respect those who don't respect themselves.......
I only read this to see firsthand what a pathetic excuse for a human being the main character is. I don't buy that this is a true story. No one can be this stupid and still live.
You were smitten by her beauty and she was smitten by your sheer stupidity.
One of the worst. NO writing skills whatsoever !! Just perversion !!!
You fag fucker you should kick her in the cunt and send her bsck to greg to see if he likes his cunt with your shoe up her cunt. Then fuck in the ass, and then put your foot up her ass and send her to good old greg,y fag fucker.
you write so well. Please keep going, I had to cum reading about Greg...thank you so much.
Wouldn't he just stand up and smack the shit out of her? Especially since he's a young guy and they're hormones are raging. He would have been angry to say the least. She's lucky he didn't put her in the hospital.
you are one fag motherfucker,you should tie that bitch to a tree and beat her skinkie cunt until she cant piss from her cunt then shove the biggest fucken butt pluge up her ass and than send her to dush bag tit bitting boy friend, dont worry about him be cause thay stil make bats.
Cum licking sissy boy cuckold asshole. And that 's the good things about the main character of this tale. Kill yourself.
Why are you reading and trolling it? You really have nothing better to do?
OH HAPPY DAY ! OH WHAT A WONDERFUL WORLD.......
AND HIS SLUT LAURIE AND GREG THE CREEP ARE IN ADVANCED STAGE TO, IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF WEEKS
R.I.P(iss and shit), UNO ESTRELLA
ANd you dumbass! Learn that he can't be cuckold. They aren't married! Stupid story. Glad you stopped posting.
That's exactly how my girlfriend tricked me into eating her just used pussy. for several months I would act like I didn't know, and she would ask me if her pussy tasted good, all I could do by then was easy yes and then she would start cumming
It is a pity that this did not go on for longer. Her control is absolute and her giggling adorable. I hope that they go on to have a very happy Non- PIV marriage lasting many years,and with children,noticeably different from him. And he,highly qualified and respected in his profession enables a very good standard for their life together. It might be very difficult at times,he,having much to put up with,but,she,is so caring of him,and knows just what he needs to be TRULY HAPPY,rather than just conventionally welloff.
I do wish that authors would use their dashboard and delete rude comments from trolls. So depressing to read as one tries to get the opinion of fellow enthusiast.
This is a story about being mentally abused in various ways.
Don't get me wrong, personally I'd be super down to watch/hear about my wife get fucked by a man. However, I'd never let someone treat me the way she treated you. You could find a respectful girl who would cuck you if you wanted but actually cares about you as a person and not just a sex toy.
I love the entire story. It's quite old but nevertheless i edged a lot while i read it.
Stupid whore and cuck shit, almost as hilarious as the cuck not fantasy comments.
I loved stories like this very much.
That makes you hot when I talk about Kevin doesn't it? Yes I said as a fantasy but I know for sure that I'm considerably bigger than him because everyone in gym class has to take a shower at the end. If Kevin had anything on me it would be that he came from money and maby a little better in some sports than me. Mainly in basketball but I very seldom got the ball passed to me because of the coach's orders. He couldn't hardly ever hit a foul shot. I hit as many as he missed. Back to the teasing Karen my girlfriend didn't tease all of the time just once in a. I would have to admit sometimes it was stimulating one night I was aggravated at the way the coach chewed on me for making a long shot that I should have passed to Kevin. I knew the real reason for the ass chewing was because the player on the other team scored more than Kevin even if we won. When Karen said suck on them like Kevin baby do it.I sucked hard and pulled away and I knew it had to hurt a little. I got out of the car straighten up and was getting in the driver's seat and she was asking what got into me. I just said I'm through listening to all of this Kevin talk if you want to be with him tell me please because I'm done hearing his name during our lovemaking. She started crying and said that she only wanted to be with me but she thought I liked her talking about him. I'm sorry if I mis lead you to believe that I turned on by you being with someone else but I'm not. His name never came up unless it was just common talk. Yes later after he had left town and returned he did hit on Karen a couple of times until he got the message she wasn't interested. I even has a talk with him and he took me serious. To my knowledge he never bothered her again.
100% true...............yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight!!!!
Here let me make the story short and sweet, and far better written than this fecal matter you posted.
Describes how wife conditioned her hubby to be a cuck -Pt II....made him realize he was a repressed homosexual and THAT is 100% true.
So Greg traded in his Mustang for a "Camero" the second week? Super hot story, just found that funny. It's Camaro btw.
A different way to look at it is that she was cheating on her boyfriend Greg with you and that we was the actual cuckold.
Very hot. The description of Laurie feathering his cock was really good. Hope you write more.