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The End.
- COMMENTS
Lovecraft_Loreover 2 years ago5 stars
I am trying to write my own CYOA on here. It is harder than it looks.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoProbably the most confused, jumbled, ill-thought-out excuse for a story, if you excuse the cellphone submissions of a few functionally illiterate members here.
Really.
Not even an interesting exercise in technique.
Were you on drugs when you "wrote" this?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoWhere were you going without ever knowing the way? Were you leading, dragging or just trying to see if I might catch up? Cant really tell what I'm supposed to feel after being exposed to all the possibilities so I just dont feel much of anything. Theres probably a good story or two in there but it seems like too many things got mixed into the soup. Sugar and garlic are both tasty, but not together.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoHaving multiple "The End"s was confusing and it could have been broken into chapters instead. Also, writing it in second-person was odd. Not all of us are named John.
