All Comments on 'Confessions Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hell Yes!!!

continue...

BUICK GSBUICK GSover 19 years ago
YES DR.

MORE OF THE GOOD DR. HELL I DON'T KNOW WHAT GRABS YOU MORE HIS TROUBLES SHE TRYING TO CURE, OR THE PASSION HE IS CURING IN THE GOOD DR.

CWCWover 19 years ago
yes indeed

this story is surely worthy of being continued.

excellent first chapter.

gamma33gamma33over 19 years ago
HELL YES, CONTINUE!!!

Quite a twist from all the other incest stories posted here and refressingly great! The good doctor proves to be a good stand-in for the departed sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Welcome back Zombie!!!

I absolutely loved your "Step-Sister Seduction" story & have been anxiously awaiting your next story!!! Bravo thus far! Cannot wait for the next installment!!! WOW!!!!

-Jim

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
DAMN!!!

Damn Hot! keep it going

gatormangatormanover 19 years ago
Please continue

If you don't continue this story, it will be a crime against humanity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This Story Rocks man

With great narration, increadible dialogue believable story line and the fact that it doesn't get strait to the sex. I love the history of the brother and sister and the increadible love that he shared for her. You should write more about the tension just before she left and how that affected him...and his parents reaction to her death and him still being alive etc

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awesome!

Great character develpment. I look forward to some hotter sex and deeper secrets!! Good Stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep going!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Awsome!!

That was SO Hot!! And the way you just rolled into a dual story theme line was trick!! PLEASE continue/more!!

Xman72357Xman72357over 19 years ago
Great Story Line

The story line is fantastic it is building to a big climax. Keep up the good Work

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WTF!

come on, now! the horny doc should be reported immediately for abusing such a vulnerable young man! seriously!

it is such a big detraction/distraction from the main story! what's this, a little break between meals?

the old wrinkled doc should have kept her panties and let the good story teller tell us the story of Michael's romantic but ill-fated relatioship with his beloved older sister!

such a honry and rude psychiatrist; her license must be revoked immediately; but i'll give her the benefit of the doubt. she must heal our hero, who's in turmoil over his late sister Angie; and don't tell me she's only in her late 30s or early 40s and a undescribably beautiful woman, too. i'll report her for sure, if you tell me she's like that and has been having sex with many vulnerable young teens like this young man here! lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
FREAKIN SWEET!

great story, great character development. Please, contnue this awesome story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
AWESOME!

Great development, dual plot worked in nicely, lots of room for at least 2 more chapters. You have to write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Oh my God!!!

You CANNOT stop this story here!!! How can you even pause at such a time. Come on! Get back to work and finish this story, don't leave us hanging here...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
You left 16 of your admirers hanging including me.

Great beginning in theme, style, writing and editing. But then you came to a dismal ending by not finishing the story. How can I vote when you've left 16 previous devoted people down?

victoriangentvictoriangentalmost 14 years ago
Continue?

Surely you jest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue

please continue this story

reader018reader018about 12 years ago
more please!

dont just stop! please add more to the story

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