by zombie22
MORE OF THE GOOD DR. HELL I DON'T KNOW WHAT GRABS YOU MORE HIS TROUBLES SHE TRYING TO CURE, OR THE PASSION HE IS CURING IN THE GOOD DR.
this story is surely worthy of being continued.
excellent first chapter.
Quite a twist from all the other incest stories posted here and refressingly great! The good doctor proves to be a good stand-in for the departed sister.
I absolutely loved your "Step-Sister Seduction" story & have been anxiously awaiting your next story!!! Bravo thus far! Cannot wait for the next installment!!! WOW!!!!
-Jim
If you don't continue this story, it will be a crime against humanity.
With great narration, increadible dialogue believable story line and the fact that it doesn't get strait to the sex. I love the history of the brother and sister and the increadible love that he shared for her. You should write more about the tension just before she left and how that affected him...and his parents reaction to her death and him still being alive etc
Great character develpment. I look forward to some hotter sex and deeper secrets!! Good Stuff!
That was SO Hot!! And the way you just rolled into a dual story theme line was trick!! PLEASE continue/more!!
The story line is fantastic it is building to a big climax. Keep up the good Work
come on, now! the horny doc should be reported immediately for abusing such a vulnerable young man! seriously!
it is such a big detraction/distraction from the main story! what's this, a little break between meals?
the old wrinkled doc should have kept her panties and let the good story teller tell us the story of Michael's romantic but ill-fated relatioship with his beloved older sister!
such a honry and rude psychiatrist; her license must be revoked immediately; but i'll give her the benefit of the doubt. she must heal our hero, who's in turmoil over his late sister Angie; and don't tell me she's only in her late 30s or early 40s and a undescribably beautiful woman, too. i'll report her for sure, if you tell me she's like that and has been having sex with many vulnerable young teens like this young man here! lol
great story, great character development. Please, contnue this awesome story!
Great development, dual plot worked in nicely, lots of room for at least 2 more chapters. You have to write more!
You CANNOT stop this story here!!! How can you even pause at such a time. Come on! Get back to work and finish this story, don't leave us hanging here...
Great beginning in theme, style, writing and editing. But then you came to a dismal ending by not finishing the story. How can I vote when you've left 16 previous devoted people down?