All Comments on 'Confessions of a Pervert Pt. 02'

Loved it all

The story was crafted very, very well. I do not care much for spelling or capitalization, but I look at the erotic aspect. Following Chekhov's principle*, tonz1404 avoided all unnecessary detail; as a result every sentence added to the build-up.

This story is a well conceived erotic fantasy.

Let me reiterate: SAM IS A KEEPER!

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* According to Chekhov, a writer should mention a gun ONLY IF it will be used as a weapon later in the story line. The logic behind it is not to mention stuff that is irrelevant for the story line.

Hi tonz1404, you passed "the Chekhov's test" with fying colours!