All Comments on 'Conlan & the Tomboy Ch. 02'

The progression in your story is just right. I like the direction you are taking, and though I'm not sure what will happen next. I look forward to finding out. Keep it coming. Bravo!

cant wait for the next chapter ,keep it coming. good story line

The story line is good, but the writing needs work.

The story is great, but it still needs abit of editing. Hope to see your next entry soon!

IM waiting to Ch. 3 :)

MORE! Need more! After going through as many stories as I have, it is easy to pick out ones that are the best. You have great writing skills and definately need to continue with this story!

I loved the characters and the progression. when are you going to write the next chapter????

i need more. love the story when do we get to read chapter 3?!?!?

Wow, really enjoyed this... great concepts for the Lycans! And super hot! Just watch the typos and tense etc...just got tripped up by it a little sometimes.

Please write another chapter this story is good and I for one would like to know what happens next.

You need to finish the story. The best Werewolf story I have read yet.

Please finished