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All Comments on 'Conned'

by Ocallaghan79

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good story but needs more proofreading

Tons of easily catchable typos

wolf9696wolf9696about 10 years ago
4/5

loved it...would like to read more....u need to do better editing for 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Pure Hotness

Very hot story. I know I know this comment of mine is lame.

aspiringdevilaspiringdevilabout 10 years ago
Loved it

A Few typos are to be expected for your first story, and I really dug Moon I'd love to see a sequel to this. This is a promising start.

wolf9696wolf9696about 8 years ago
5/5

dayyyyymnnnn.....loved it... please.. do improve your story via an editor ... would love to read more

BoiPussyBoiPussyalmost 8 years ago
Woah

Nom nom, yumny

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
so hot

i loved it. hope you write a second chapter to this.

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