by noname5551212
You forgot to write the ending paragraphs. I liked the story, another chapter in lieu of an ending would be just fine.
Needs more of an ending to this. Probably write another chapter to this story where you give a detailed fucking instead of just "fucking the hell out of Stephanie." How about you let Steve/Bob get together with his baby mama and his daughter/baby mama and give them a full on family orgy after they talk about all the shit that he did.
Now all he needs to do; is to get Claudia, Roberta, Stephanie, and Karen living with him and keep them well fucked and pregnant.
Thanks for the read
poetic justice Claudia finds him and blows his ass away for fucking his kids and not her