All Comments on 'Consanguinity'

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ABSsABSsover 9 years ago
an Ending? More?

You forgot to write the ending paragraphs. I liked the story, another chapter in lieu of an ending would be just fine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Needs more

Needs more of an ending to this. Probably write another chapter to this story where you give a detailed fucking instead of just "fucking the hell out of Stephanie." How about you let Steve/Bob get together with his baby mama and his daughter/baby mama and give them a full on family orgy after they talk about all the shit that he did.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 9 years ago
A good kinky story

Now all he needs to do; is to get Claudia, Roberta, Stephanie, and Karen living with him and keep them well fucked and pregnant.

Thanks for the read

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

poetic justice Claudia finds him and blows his ass away for fucking his kids and not her

sexymeupsexymeupover 1 year ago

what a horndog he sticks his cock into any hole no matter who it is, lol.

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