by sublocked
This is just really getting good.
Please don't get bored with this story as many here do, and leave us hanging.
What I find very real in this is the Humanization of Johanna as well as the
Feminization of Jack...Jackie...Jaquline.
Thank you for this.
Randee
Another great chapter. Don't listen to the people who have no imagination or no time for a plot to develop. Take all the time and chapters you want. It's your story. You are doing a great job my friend keep up the good work.