All Comments on 'Consent Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More chapters Please

This is just really getting good.

Please don't get bored with this story as many here do, and leave us hanging.

What I find very real in this is the Humanization of Johanna as well as the

Feminization of Jack...Jackie...Jaquline.

Thank you for this.

Randee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not really a story

Not much of a paragraph. Why bother?

subguygcsubguygcalmost 8 years ago

Another great chapter. Don't listen to the people who have no imagination or no time for a plot to develop. Take all the time and chapters you want. It's your story. You are doing a great job my friend keep up the good work.

Anonymous
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