All Comments on 'Consent Ch. 14'

That was beautiful. Thank you :)

This epic story has been an amazing read! Even though some of the elements involved are not my cup of fish (the humiliation is something I have enough of in real life) like any relationship you take the good with bad. As far as the prose itself, you are in the top 1% of writers submitting to Lit. I am looking forward to reading the rest of your stories and hoping for more from you soon..!? Also wanted to say I'm very happy to hear about your getting well. Please keep up the good work.

I would sell my soul to become Jackie.

A wonderful story nicely written. If I am a troll for pointing out something I find distracting and thereby distasteful so be it. The constant use of "author's comments" at the beginning of every chapter is unprofessional and drags what could be a superb story to an average level. If the writer wants to produce drivel that he feels compelled to explain to the reader he succeeded. He obviously knows how to write, but his practice is much like a six year old that can't seem to shut up when necessary.

Umm, thank-you. I think.

No, actually I don't really care. I write here for practice and a distraction. Just ramblings of fantasy. What I don't like is trolls and what they say with impunity and ignorance. And regarding comments about my stories, I am God...I can respond to them or delete them, whatever I choose.

I don't know why, but I will leave yours alone.

You're welcome.

About the author's comments at the beginning of the chapter - I welcomed them, if I don't want to read them, I skip them, otherwise I read them. Just as I would the foreword or prologue to any book or piece of fiction.

A good story and well written, I enjoyed it and voted.

Sometimes on the more outrageously unsafe or unethical fantasy stories, I appreciate an author's notes at the beginning of the story. It helps me relax and enjoy the story when the author acknowledges that their depiction of a type of play, medical procedure, or something else isn't actually safe(r), and shouldn't be used as a template for real life. Such introductions help the safety-minded side of me relax, because I know that a reasonable reader has been advised that the unsafe or unethical practices in this story shouldn't be duplicated in real life. The author has demonstrated that they understand the difference between reality and fantasy, allowing me to more readily enjoy some of the more extreme fantasies.

I loved it but in relation to the other comment is ... the writer expressly said it was fiction not reality ... so please accept it for what it is although a troll like yourself cannot imagine what wearing female clothes would ever feel like ... get over your prejudices and accept people for what they actually are ... be real

Simply lovely. Even vanilla lovers can experience the sense of being alone while in a crowded room. This is that kind of thing, or so it seems to me. A glimpse, perhaps an idealized glimpse, into a lifestyle many readers only imagine living.

Once again, thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Remarkable story. Really liked it. I know it's fiction but it really makes you think about what kinds of relationships can maintain stability longterm. I feel as confused as Jackie about the mechanics of their relationship. Hope it works out for them!

I loved this story all the way.this could and should be printed off as a book. I fell in love with Jackie's transformation, I so badly wanted to be her. This author has great talent.

I both hated and loved Johanna,

What a journey. Great story, glad you were able to complete it amidst health issues and all. Will definitely be keeping an eye out for any other stories from you

Opposites attract as a twisted Love Story of Jackie and Johanna as I can see the inner conflict in each and interesting it is the last submission from the author who might have won one battle with cancer but either lost the War of life or has gone on to another phase of life. This saga has ended and yet could continue just as we do in our quest. Has Jackie found true Acceptance in understanding and embracing the idea and himself and finally relented to just be. Not worrying about what could, should or might happen but fully accept it as it is. If so then his Love for Johanna is Pure and the ultimate but surreal Love. Just as Johanna created what she wanted and in doing so found hers, even when she resisted she still showed her caringeven showing her real feeling like a man does and then retracts them so not to show his vulnerability or any sign of weakness safely tucked away and forgotten for the moment. Secretly wishing he could share hi true and darkest thoughts and feelings but knowing he can't as society would not condone it and he would be punished or put down for it so he find a diversion, perversion or simple thing to enjoy or even exploit anything to release it or stifle it till it rears its head again filling his mind with the thoughts. Just as the battle between them goes on within us; till we peacefully sleep or finish our journey. Did the author finish his Journey or find his elusive peaceful sleep ; although I believe I am just More Hungry to find a Jack out there to make my own Jackie and see if I cross the line that Johanna would not step over as time will tell and if i were to find the right response