All Comments on 'Contacted Through Feedback 2.0'

You ever travel to Texas? Lol

This is your best story yet. I hope you get/write about another round (for want of a better term) with Alana, the chemistry between you two was... volcanic in its heat and intensity. Loved this story!

Your language has an immediacy that feels fun and genuine. Also appreciate the clean editing style and judicious punctuation. Great writing. Don't stop!