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POVscribe about 5 years ago

Very realistic

Your language has an immediacy that feels fun and genuine. Also appreciate the clean editing style and judicious punctuation. Great writing. Don't stop!

Dark_aeon over 6 years ago

Awesome

This is your best story yet. I hope you get/write about another round (for want of a better term) with Alana, the chemistry between you two was... volcanic in its heat and intensity. Loved this story!

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Perfect

You ever travel to Texas? Lol

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