All Comments on 'Conversion to Perversion Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Good, but way too rushed.

BrettJBrettJabout 8 years agoAuthor
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Glad you liked it, but sorry you thought it rushed. I can assure you, it was not. I write in chapters and I always know the point where I want to break up the story. There is more - a LOT more - on the way. I'm writing a fair bit now, so maybe successive chapters will be to your liking.

NicealloverNicealloverover 1 year ago

I love it! Very erotic story about a woman who is seduced by her friend who has ulterior motives. I don’t believe for a second she will end with her fiancé.

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