All Comments on 'Corporate Relief'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good - but just an - escapism quickie.

Lots of very good scenic ideas consistent with mild consensual BDSM and humil play. Overall, execution is on the above average side.

One minor downside is that the plot line levels off fast. Once the play opportunities and environment are established there is only a series of variations. No real plot dynamics like personal drama, conflicts, relationship and character developments.

Even after the scene with a subordinate colleague, there is no follow-up in vanilla world. Just a > little something extra < is missing. So is one *. Thus "only" 4/5.

Thank You and all the best,

Simon

spankfunforspankfunforabout 5 years ago
Fun Reading!

More people in dominant positions could avoid heart attacks if they gave up complete control to someone else a couple of days a week! The best part of this story was when her co-worker, whom she had humiliated at work, did even more to her! Loved your thinking!

thomas_deanthomas_deanalmost 3 years ago

The Challenge of The Over -Achiever

Meet a young, statuesque, vibrant Corporate Executive. Seeking relief from complexity, she indentures herself as a maid to a well appointed couple on their estate. She takes the orders, endures the punishments and the humiliations of a submissive. Come monday morning, she fresh to go back to being a tiger. The story is not without some basis in reality. I'm told very intelligent people turn off their brain in different ways. Some take it to the extent of becoming devotees of the incredible stories reported as News in the supermarket tabloids. Do others take it as far as this bright executive?

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