by dk519
It was good, but needs to be longer. Give us another chapter! Have him take the younger sister!
Sorry, but this story is just too disjointed to hold attention and doesn't really go anywhere..
This is good and clearly in need of a chapter two where he fucks Corrie behind Jillian's back.
So far so good, but having Dave fuck Corrie would be taking the easy way out. It would be hotter to have Corrie continue teasing Dave into performing increasingly more imaginative sex on Jillian.
there's a few ways this could go.. he could start having sex with Corrie behind her back.. he could keep being teased by Corrie.. the sister could invite the sister to join or she could in fact hve been watching them the same way Corrie watches them..