by PreviaWynne
Nice story! I enjoyed it although I wish that you were both wearing pantyhose and in the Ladies restroom at Church! Well, maybe next time!
Nice start but, I would like some follow-on stories telling us who the "corrupter" is and some more action. I like the church restroom idea!
To look interesting. I agree with the 2 other comments: needs more and we need to know who the sub is... and why are the pastor and wife living apart???
Descriptions were bang on. Keep it up.
This story ended up being a lot more popular than I expected. It was originally written as a personal fantasy from me to my online girlfriend. She didn't need the extra context, but I can understand readers here wanting more.
I'll definitely be visiting this idea again. My girlfriend gets off on corrupting me. :)
This was really good,although the sex scene could have been longer and the story in General should have been a few pages,but it was really sexy and aroused me.
I believe the sex scence couldve been longer. And more detailed